4. Your last step is to revise and edit your narrative. What improvements can you
make to bring clarity to your language? Can any of your ideas be combined or
deleted? Are all of the events listed in order? Did you make any spelling errors? Did
you fulfill all of the requirements for the assignment - is your narrative one or two
paragraphs long, and does it include at least six of the listed events)? Revise and edit
your narrative in the space below. (8 points)