Course: communication skills

Writing Improvement Exercise

Your task. Re-write the following sentences with courtesy and tact. Also, make the necessary changes in the format, where required.

We are at a loss to understand, why did you send us stable chocolates?
We have been very patient with our due payment.
Apparently, you overlooked our terms.
We request that you send us the pictures of the faded rug.
You failed to enclose a copy of your N.I.C.
We are sorry you are dissatisfied with the flavor of our pizzas.
In which you assert that your shipment was delivered to you after 7 days of order placement.
You task. Re-write the following sentence with concreteness.

Dear Madam, your will receive your order soon.
There are many people ahead of me in the queue.
This month my sales are significantly higher than last month.
The train took too long to reach Lahore from Multan.