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Topic question: Should violent video games be banned?

Instructions: You will organize an argument for banning violence from teens’ video games because violent video games are harmful. Read the evidence below and then organize your argument. (Copy and paste the outline below into the feedback box and add your information.)

Argument Organizer

Claim:
In your own words

Reason 1:
In your own words

Support for Reason 1:
Quote from the evidence below

Reason 2:
In your own words

Support for Reason 2:
Quote from the evidence below

Counterclaim:
What is the opposing point of view

Rebuttal Support:
Quote from the evidence below

Conclusion Clincher:
Negative effects that will occur if your readers do not follow your claim
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EVIDENCE 1

Negative Effects of Violent Video Games

In studies conducted by neuroscientists, it was found that teens who regularly play violent video games have lower rates of success in school than teens who do not play violent video games. The same parents who ban violent televisions shows from being watched in their homes must also be careful about the types of video games their teens play. Teens love their games, but their future is at stake.

Excerpt from “Family First Magazine”
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EVIDENCE 2

Negative Effects of Violent Video Games

Fights among best friends and disagreements with peers are a natural part of a teen’s daily life, but studies have consistently shown that teens who play violent video games on a regular basis are more aggressive with peers than teens who do not play these games. Is society willing to ban these violent games to support teen relationships?

Excerpt from “Adolescent Health Sociology Journal
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EVIDENCE 3

Negative Effects of Violent Video Games

A study conducted by teen psychologists found that teens who regularly play violent video games are more prone to having fights and confrontations with adults at home, school and work. Teens want the freedom to play games of their choice, but they need to be aware of the dangers.

Study by Anderson, Gentile and Buckley (2007)

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Argument Organizer (In your own words)

Claim: Violent video games should be banned.

Reason 1:
Parents should ban violent video games in their homes because the violence has a negative influence on teenagers. Violent acts on games greatly increases the possibility of teenagers becoming violent themselves.

Support for Reason 1: Evidence
Neuroscientists conducted a research and found that teenagers who played violent games on a regular basis had lower rates of success at school compared to teenagers who did not play violent video games(Family First Magazine, n.d.).

Reason 2:
Research also show that teenagers who play violent video games tend to be more aggressive and use physical violence during disagreements.

Support for Reason 2:

As a result, they can hurt someone seriously and are more likely to get into trouble with the law. Society should ban the sale of violent video games to protect the vulnerable minds of teenagers(Adolescent Health Sociology Journal,n.d.).

Counterclaim+rebuttal support:
Pychologists also did a study on teenagers asking if they felt violent video games should be ban and most of them stated that they were aware of the dangers but should still have the freedom of choice in their games. They also stated friends who played games involving violence were more prone to having fights and confrontations with adults at home, school and work (Study by Anderson, Gentile and Buckley, 2007).

Conclusion Clincher:
Teens love gaming but they have to educated on the dangers of violent video games. Refraining from playing these games excessively ensures their young minds will not become polluted by the violent scenes and cause harm to their loved ones and friends.
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Answer:

alright this is how I got 100% :) (I coppied and pasted all this from my exam)

Explanation:

 Question:                             Should violent video games be banned?

Claim:  Violent video games should be banned.    

  Reason 1:     Teens who play violent video games are usually more aggressive than teens who don’t play video games. 

 Support for reason 1:    “A study conducted by teen psychologists found that teens who regularly play violent video games are more prone to having fights and confrontations with adults at  home, school and work.”

 Reason 2: Studies found that teenagers are less likely to succeed in school if they play violent video games frequently. 

Evidence/Support: “ In studies conducted by neuroscientists, it was found that teens who regularly play violent video games have lower rates of success in school than teens who do not play violent video games. The same parents whoban violent televisions shows from being watched in their homes must alsobe careful about the types of video games their teens play.”

Counterclaim:  Teens like to play violent video games. They can have fun and play with their friends. 

 Rebuttal support : “ Teens want the freedom to play games of their choice, but they need to be aware of the dangers.”

Conclusion Clincher: If teenagers play violent video games, they will be more aggressive, and there will be more fights among the teens, in the parks and at school. 

Teacher feedback: Hi, You've made good use of the source materials provided to determine a strong argument outline./10 Claim clearly stated in one full sentence/10 Reason 1 clearly stated in a complete sentence in your own words/10  Support for reason 1 clearly quoted from available source as a valid reason/10  Reason 2 clearly stated in a complete sentence in your own words/10 Support for reason 2 clearly quoted from available source as a valid reason/10  Counterclaim stated in a complete sentence in your own words/10  Rebuttal provided valid evidence for the rebuttal/10 Conclusion provided a clincher in own words/10 Completed as an outline as stated in the instructions/10  Clarity in Writing (grammar, spelling, punctuation, 3rd person, formal language)Congratulations on completing the course!

Points earned on this question: 100

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