WILL GIVE BRAINLIEST!!!!! Read this paragraph from Yves's analysis of Enrique's Journey.

(1) Nazario draws on Enrique's experience to illustrate what children face in their attempt to escape difficult conditions. (2) She describes the dangers he faces on his journey northward. (3) The threat of extortion and violence from gangsters illustrates how vulnerable such children are. (4) But gangsters do not pose the only threat. (5) Even the police, whose job is to uphold and enforce the law, steal from the migrants. (6) What I find most unsettling, though, is Enrique's temporary alliance with an MS gangster.

Which sentence should Yves revise to make it more objective?

the first sentence
the third sentence
the fifth sentence
the sixth sentence

Respuesta :

The correct answer is the following: option D. Yves should revise the sixth sentence in order to make it more objective. The sixth sentence of the paragraph states: "What I find most unsettling, though, is Enrique's temporary alliance with an MS gangster." This sentence has an subjective perspective as the opinion and feelings of the writer are shown. The use of the personal pronoun "I" with the descriptive adjective of "unsettling" gives the reader a clear idea of how and what the writer thinks about the character, which is the opposite of an objective sentence. An objective sentence is the one that is not influenced by the emotions, thoughts and beliefs of the writer but only describes situations, people or events based in facts only.

Answer: D

Explanation:  What I find most unsettling, though, is Enrique's temporary alliance with an MS gangster.