Read the sentence.
Which is the best way to revise this sentence using
descriptive detail and sensory words?
Abel
Ness loves her kitten.
Ness feels a lot of love for her pet kitten because she
thinks it's nice.
Ness gently rubs her cheek against the soft, fluffy fur
of her tiny kitten.
Ness has a tiny kitten that she really loves a lot
because it is so cute.
Ness puts her cheek against her kitten's fur to show
how she feels.