can somebody help me with this 55 word scary story


Answer:
Title: The haunted house.
During a summer day, Tom, Luke, Austin, and Jack decided to play football.
The ball landed on the porch of the house haunted by the spirit of a serial killer who locked the people in till they die.
He took it, but a force pulled him inside.
The boys grabbed him and pulled him out.
Explanation:
The story should have a main character or characters, an introduction, a problem, and an ending where the problem is solved. We have to use the same tense when we write and to keep the suspense and fear in a horror story. Also, the title should be catching and related to the plot of the story.