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The fire alarm woke me.

Which is the best way to revise this sentence using descriptive words?

The fire alarm’s loud beeping awakened me.
The beeping fire alarm quickly woke me up.
The loud fire alarm woke me up from a dream.
The deafening fire alarm shocked me out of a deep sleep.

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Answer:

Option D

Explanation:

The use of deafening, shocked, deep, make the sentence sound more descriptive.

The other options are less descriptive, not giving you as clear of an image as option D in this case.

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Answer:

The answer is D.

Explanation:

This uses the most descriptive language, most powerful verbs, and even includes a gerund modifying the subject. It includes adjectives that support the imagery of this scene and ultimately help the reader see best the events occurring that the author wishes to describe.