The writer wants to use words that imitate the sound of appliances. Which choice best accomplishes this goal?
As he entered the kitchen, Emilio was engrossed in the "blurry activity of chefs using mixers, shifting pots from one burner to another, and rushing when timers went off".

Choose 1 answer:

(Choice A) NO CHANGE

(Choice B) speed of the mixers, the sight of pots and pans changing hands, and timers sounding off.

(Choice C) whirring of mixers, clanging of pots and pans, and the beeping of timers.

"Whirring of mixers, clanging of pots and pans, and beeping of timers," add noise to each of the activities that was going on, this is also known as an onomatopoeia.

Whirring Noise associated: Whirrrrrrrrrrrrrr

Clanging noise associated: CLANGG

Beeping noise associated: BEEP BEEP BEEP

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