Using the topic you have chosen, you will revise one passage from your narrative essay by adding descriptive language and sensory details using Part Four of the Narrative Organizer. Review the grading rubric to ensure that you have included all elements for this assignment.

PLZ I NEED IT BIG TIME PLZ ILL GIVE 50 POINTS AND MARK AS BRAINLYIEST
SORRY TYPING FAST AND SPELLED IT WRONG BUT PLZ HELP ME.