Read the passage.
It is difficult to babysit my cousin Sheila. She stays up until all hours of the night. She wails until I check on her. She wails because she wants
attention. She never actually needs anything when she stays up late crying. Even though sheila can frustrate me sometimes, I still always love her. I
try to remember what it was like when I was younger, and as I recall, I never wanted to go to bed either.
Which revision to the underlined sentences has the most diverse use of sentence clauses to create variety?
1. It is difficult to babysit my cousin Sheila, who stays up until all hours of the night. She wails until I check on her. She wails because
she wants attention. She never actually needs anything when she stays up late crying.
2. It is difficult to babysit my cousin Sheila. She wails until I check on her and always wants to stay up until all hours of the night. She
wails for attention. She never actually needs anything when she stays up late crying.
3. It is difficult to babysit my cousin Shelia. She stays up until all hours of the night and wails until I check on her. She never needs
anything. She stays up late crying for attention.
O 4. It is difficult to babysit my cousin Sheila, who wants to stay up until all hours of the night. She wails until I come in and check on her.
Although she never needs anything when she stays up late crying, she wails for attention.