Pls real answers please points You will revise one body paragraph from your informational article and write a reflection paragraph in which you explain the revisions you made.

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Choose one body paragraph from your informational article to revise.

Copy this paragraph into a new document.

Review your paragraph for coherence. Make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for this topic.

Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.

Review your paragraph for correct English language conventions. Correct any errors.

Write a short reflection paragraph on the revisions you made, describing the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing.

I don't have a paragraph so can someone please write a paragraph about jelly fishes it should have the problems that the animal causes, who it affects, and how the problems can be solved.
PLEASE HELPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jellyfish blooms, which were already bad enough, can even affect the political stability of a country. A power plant in the Philippines was shut off after the system was clogged by jellyfish and because of it, thousands of people were without electricity. The Philippine citizens were so upset that there was nearly a political upheaval in the country. What can be done about all these disruptions? These blooms affect many different countries and the effects are devastating.

(Is this good or do I need to explain because I am a little confused)

karenuba0987 karenuba0987 · Answer 2 · 2021-10-21T23:00:09+02:00

Answer:

Moreover, jellyfish blooms can even affect the political stability of a country. This is true because a power plant in the Philippines was shut off after the system was clogged by jellyfish, and because of it, thousands of people were without lights or electricity. The Philippine citizens were so angry that there was nearly a political upheaval in the country. What can be done about all these problems? These blooms affect many countries, and the effects are devastating. Not to worry, there are some possible solutions to these blooms. People have come up with ideas like eating the jellyfish or even getting a different species of jellyfish to eat the jellyfish that are causing these blooms.

I changed some of the words in my paragraph to make it my own and combined sentences to make the writing sound smoother. I even added more transition words and made sure to correct any errors in my punctuation.

Explanation:

Ok, so this is an add-on of what the other guy said, and stop hunting him down to finish his answer. (yeah i know you said, "yeah i'm talking about english don't act lik eyou forgot)

I tried, and if this isn't good enough, then try to work with it, and make it better.