"we are alone her under the earth...And now there is nothing here to save our one body, and it is strange to see only tomwi legs stretched on the ground, and on the wall before us the shadow of our head" (Rand 17). What inconsistencies do you notice about the language on this quote?

In Anthem Chapter 1

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An inconsistency in the language of the passage is the use of the pronoun "her" in the first clause.

We can arrive at this answer because:

  • The pronoun impedes the fluidity of the clause and impairs the coherence of the text.
  • The use of the pronoun in this clause is incorrect and does not promote the sentence's meaning.
  • The pronoun, in this clause, does not refer to anything and is displaced in the sentence.

In this case, the pronoun should be excluded from the sentence, or replaced by the word "here," which would promote greater coherence in the text.

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