I NEED HELP ASAP THANKS YOUU!!

Imagine it's the first day of school and you have been asked to
stand in front of your class to introduce yourself. In 5-6
complete Spanish sentences, introduce and describe yourself
to your classmates.
Some things you could mention are your name, where you're
from, some things you do, your personality and physical
characteristics, etc.

If there is anyway to make this sound better please change it that would be a great help I appreciate it :))))

I would like to translate this :

“Hello class, My name is ___ I am fourteen years old. I am from Los Angles. I have two little brother and one little sister, and I am the eldest sibling. I like to play volleyball and listen to different music. Although I am shy I am also a very active and cheerful person.”

Respuesta :

An“Hola clase, Mi nombre es ___ Tengo catorce años. Yo soy de Los Angles. Tengo dos hermanitos y una hermanita, y soy el hermano mayor. Me gusta jugar al voleibol y escuchar música diferente. Aunque soy tímido, también soy una persona muy activa y alegre ”.

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