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Greg looked at the sky and wondered if they should turn back. kaguya and Red were following greg from behind. greg called his friend kaguya the moment red was looking away. "We should hurry up and leave him." he said. at that time... Kaguya knew that greg had no trust whatsoever in red. she began hesitating in a roller coaster of emotions as the storm thunderously grew. kaguya had thoughts of greg as a kind person believing in justice no matter what. and now she unexpectedly started to endear a stranger fearing more surprising changes of character from greg coming out of that extremely pressing set of situations. as they continued to walk quietly kaguya was next to red and greg was following them in a sense of betrayal from the one he called his "friend". another horrendous lighting struck the earth as fast as greg's growing envy and jealousy.
He looked up again to see kaguya reaching red's hands. a sudden flash of ominous anger was felt by him. He gripped his fists tight and ran towards red inorder to mercilessly punch him in the face. As the the lightning storm grew more intense, greg was looking at a girl with a broken jaw lying on the ground. as if he was possessed, as if he was being manipulated...he suddenly realized that kaguya was pushed by the intensely strong wind into his fists. He then acted quick out of surprise...he punched his frail friend with bloody jealousy. tears began dropping out of his eyes like the rain falling on her fallen body. not only greg who checked her pulse but also the neutral red knew that she was no longer. and so red calmed greg down by telling him that she'll be okay even though she won't....because death is not revertible.