Read the following short excerpt of student writing. Use your vocabulary and grammar knowledge to determine which suggestions you would make to improve his or her grammar and word choice. I really thought she loved me but I discovered her grave betrayal one afternoon. It was easy to figure out because she accidentally sent a text to me that was meant for him. I was confused by the text because it said, "Don't tell Mike." I felt insulted that she thought she could get away with this infidelity. At first I felt very angry bitter and hateful but then I felt so hopeless and depressed. I longed for her to call me. I thought if I could just hear her pleasing voice, maybe then I would not be filled with such bitterness. Instead of calling her I talked to another friend who is good at listening and feeling my pain. Talking with her makes me feel euphoric. I think I may be on the road to recovery. What word would you suggest to replace the underlined word or words in this excerpt? At first I felt very angry but then I felt so hopeless and depressed. I longed for her to call me. (5 points) euphonious amiable despondent euphoric

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Answer:

Add commas.

Split up long sentences, because they are run-ons.

Add more periods and switch the sentences up a bit. It seems like you are using the word “I” a little to much. Try saying things like “Me personally” or “Myself” because readers get tired of reading the same things over and over again. hope this helped!!