A work of literature is revised in order to make its meaning clearer. One of the techniques of revision is to reduce long sentences to short ones and use correct grammatical errors and use the right tenses.
At the beginning of her speech, Chisholm uses parallel syntax to emphasize her claim that she is the ideal candidate.
She presents herself as a new kind of candidate who can bring an era of positivity to the U.S. She says that Nixon failed to bring the courage the spirit, the character, and the words to lift us, to bring out the best in us, to rekindle in each of us our faith in the American dream.
Chisholm's stylized phrasing underscores the incredible opportunity that Nixon missed and that she can set right.
The phrasing provides clear connections between the thesis and Chisholm's syntax structure, adding more transitions to describe how the ideas in the paragraph are related using a clear topic sentence that connects the thesis of the essay, to its purpose, including several more quotations that highlight the positivity in the speech.
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