Can someone take a look at my thesis and give me some tips on how I can structure it better? Don't rewrite it for me just give some tips please... I would prefer for this to be through message since I did write this thesis myself and I wouldn't want anyone to take it and then cause me to get marked for plagiarism...
(Also: Feel free to message me if you ever need help with an essay because I am really into writing and I have excellent grammar if you ever need someone to revise and edit your work.)
