Respuesta :
In order to have more effective transition, what this student would have to do would be: Paragraph 3 needs to begin with more information about how bread is made.
What is this story about?
This was about the invention of the snacks donut. The story tells of the marine who invented it.
A good way to make the transition in the story would be the second to the third paragraph can be done by adding more information on how the bread is made.
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Answer:
D) The first sentence in paragraph 3 needs to be about Hanson Gregory.
Explanation:
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