Juana is building a new website for her event-planning
business and wants to include some persuasive text that
helps her draw in new clients. Read Juana's draft.
Everyone likes a party, but planning one is hard work!
Why not leave the hard work to us? Picture-Perfect
Parties has experience planning events of all sizes and
can help you make your dream event a reality. Sit back
and leave it all to us. We can plan and manage your
event from start to finish. We also offer partial planning
and day-of coordination for large events. Our clever and
crafty touches will make your party picture perfect!
How can Juana best revise the text to help draw in new
clients?
O by stating her main idea at the beginning of the
paragraph
O by making unsupported claims about her competitors
O by offering a special discount to first-time customers
O by choosing information that is more appropriate to
the topic