I love you Casey McMenamin with all my heart
sitting here at my desk thinking about you
i wish it could be you and me
that would make me happy
to share feelings with you at my desk
it's pretty good, instead of saying 'I love you Casey McMenamin with all my heart' you could just begin the poem with 'Sitting here at my desk thinking about you' but if you feel you like your version better then go for it
