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Nova revised her verb phrase, "applied for the scholarship" to "rigorously pursued the scholarship," to include vivid imagery.

How did Nova’s revision impact her writing?

It established a clear setting for the reader.
It created a sense of calm in the narrative.
It engaged the senses creating excitement.
It lowered the intensity of the verb.

Respuesta :

Nova's revision from "applied for the scholarship" to "rigorously pursued the scholarship" strengthened her writing by engaging the senses and creating excitement. This is because "rigorously pursued" implies a more active and determined effort compared to "applied," which is a more passive verb. This use of stronger verbs helps to create a more vivid and engaging narrative for the reader.

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