can u write this in formal English pls

One time me and my friends went to the St.Timothy fair. We went on many crazy rides that went upside down and really fast. After the fair me and my friends went to mcdonalds and we thought that itd be funny if we walked through the drive through instead of going in a car, We then found out that the mcdonalds was closed so we went to another that one was closed then another and it open but then when we got close to the window to order some angry guy came out of nowwhere with a knife in his hand so we decided to leave. After this we went to wendys and then we finally ate after an hour of searching for a place to eat.

Respuesta :

My friend and I went to a fair , St. Timothy fair. The rides were insane, they went upside down and were fast. Once we left the fair, my friend and I decided to  go to a fast food restaurant, McDonald's. While we walked there we conversed how funny it would be if we ordered in the drive thru. When we got there we were immediately disappointed, the McDonalds had closed. Quickly getting over it, we walked to another, finding that it was also closed. Once more we continued on for another mcdonalds. Once we found one, we shortly found out that it was open.Although as we explored the drive thru we found a man with a knife. We scurried away, soon finding a Wendy's. We finally ate after an hour of searching.   




Sorry if it was bad I did this in a rush!