Respuesta :
It contains specific, credible evidence but uses a disrespectful tone that should be edited.
The argument has valid points such as the use of educational apps, but calls anyone opposing it names such as naive. If they took out that part, and improved the tone at the bottom a bit, the author would sound more mature and composed. Hope this helps!
The argument has valid points such as the use of educational apps, but calls anyone opposing it names such as naive. If they took out that part, and improved the tone at the bottom a bit, the author would sound more mature and composed. Hope this helps!
Answer:
It fails to support it's claim with specific, credible evidence and uses a disrespectful tone.
Explanation: it's quite self explanatory, there's no credible evidence given besides that of an opinion, plus it uses a tone that is immature and disrespectful.
It fails to support it's claim with specific, credible evidence and uses a disrespectful tone.
Explanation: it's quite self explanatory, there's no credible evidence given besides that of an opinion, plus it uses a tone that is immature and disrespectful.