contestada

Remember: An example of a pronoun error would be putting them instead of they/those in a sentence such as:
Them are the men I saw in the CCTV footage from the petrol station.
Correct the two pronoun-related errors in this paragraph:
By 1977, technology had developed to the extent that Dr. Paul MacCready successfully flew a 1.6 mile-long figure of eight in his Gossamer
Condor. With the subsequent incorporation of lightweight wonder materials such as carbon fibre and Kevlar, two years later the newly
developed Gossamer Albatross achieved what was hitherto thought impossible, and crossed 22 miles of the English Channel at an average
height of just five feet!
After more successes in the mid-80s, an American craft, Daedelus, named after Icarus's dad and piloted by a Greek cycling champ, flew more
than 70 miles over the Mediterranean Sea in just under four hours, earning their creators the records for both the furthest distance flown and
the longest flight duration, despite the fact that a headwind caused the plane to ditch in the sea just yards away from our intended landing
point.

Respuesta :

By 1977, technology had developed to the extent that Dr. Paul MacCready successfully flew a 1.6 mile-long figure of eight in his Gossamer Condor. With the subsequent incorporation of lightweight wonder materials such as carbon fibre and Kevlar, two years later the newly developed Gossamer Albatross achieved what was hitherto thought impossible, and crossed 22 miles of the English Channel at an average height of just five feet!

After more successes in the mid-80s, an American craft, Daedelus, named after Icarus's dad and piloted by a Greek cycling champ, flew more than 70 miles over the Mediterranean Sea in just under four hours, earning its creators the records for both the furthest distance flown and the longest flight duration, despite the fact that a headwind caused the plane to ditch in the sea just yards away from their intended landing point.