Read the sample again. Think about how you can change word choice and details to write for an older audience.
Itās more important than ever for young people to help keep our planet clean. Pollution is increasing, which can cause us to be sick. Hopefully, before you throw a bottle in the trash or garbage out the window, you stop and think about how it affects the planet. Try to recycle and pick up trash to keep the earth clean from litter. How else can you and your friends help the environment?
To write for an older audience, "young people" can be changed to
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The words "us to be sick" can be changed to
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What suggestion can be added that would be suitable for an older audience?
The last sentence can be changed to
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