the bolded section is after the comma


Compare the bold sections of both sentences and then answer the question that follows:

Original: My father disliked sleet, but my father disliked hail more.
Revised: My father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more.

What was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence?
a. A longer phrase was converted to a single word.
b. A modifier that did not add meaning was removed.
c. Redundant phrases were eliminated.
d. Repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.